Ahh, I remember the classic days of Geoweasel. Mainly spending the time on the Doodle Board. Creating our own rip off of Geoweasel, which was just another MS Paint comic, with recolours of Kirby, Mario Bros, and Fox McCloud.
You guys started my Internet Career.
All around this was a good flash, however there is plenty or room for improvement. You mentioned this was originally from 2005, so perhaps you've improved a lot since then. Feel free to ignore what I say if that's the case.
I think all areas could be improved equally (script, characters, art, voices etc). The voice acting was alright, but characters sounded very similar and lacked a lot of personality.
The script was also "alright". The jokes were only slightly amusing.
As for the art and animation, I think your characters could benefit from being less stiff. Add some squash and stretch and exaggeration to help you sell the jokes better.
With some dedication to improving, I think you're capable of making a series that will score a lot more than the 3.5-3.6 that Geowesal episodes seem to have and will get a lot more viewers here on NG...
...or maybe you've got some better stuff you've done recently, so I'll go visit your website and see more of your stuff.
Was funny, but not the best.
I'll give you 8 cuz ur sound check sucks. Fix that and youll be on the way to success
For the longest time, I had no idea that the audio sounded so bad in these cartoons. They were recorded on an old Windows ME with bad speakers, so to me they sounded decent, but no one ever bothered to tell me how bad it really was, hah. Now I'm going back through all of these to add here to Newgrounds on a much newer and nicer computer and I can't believe how awful the audio quality is and how long it went on like that.
its ok.. outdated jokes, would of of been funny back in 2005