well
was very slow and the end pissed me off as you would say. but i do admire your art and you took some serious time in select frames but that made it more obvious how hard you were trying on other parts.
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WOOT. so i finally finished this project I've been working on. basically its a speed animation. its when you work nonstop on a flash to finish in as short of time as possible. mine took about 5 days (cuz im noob) :P but i guess im pretty proud of myself for my first one. its great to see my drawings finally come to life:P also don't expect the quality to be great,, its a speed animation. its not gonna be some naruto sh#@ :D Hope you have time on your hands to watch this :3 I was greatly inspired by spike valentines animations as you can clearly tell :P Im pretty sure i watched all of them :P
XiaoxiaoGOD responds:
lol, sorry about the end :P thank you for the review :3
OMG!!!
I miss that game so f'n much hope they make a new better one. JET SET RADIOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOO!!! Alright no complaints bout the art or the animation except I dunno just my opinion (which doesnt matter) but a lined paper look would've probably added to it. Still you had jetset involved so...
XiaoxiaoGOD responds:
haha I would hope that somebody here remembered that great game :P thanks for the review :3
No real content...
The art and animation were occasionally really cute, but it feels overly long for the amount of story that it tells. The story premise was alright, but there wasn't really enough character development to get someone into what was going on. If you do another fast project like this, I suggest focusing on putting a lot of quality (I can tell you are very capable of it) into a much shorter segment.
XiaoxiaoGOD responds:
alright thank you :P its my firs one and its all about experience so yeah.. thank you :3
I like your art
I really enjoyed this! If it had some color and some voice acting this would be top notch! Awesome work!
XiaoxiaoGOD responds:
thank you very much :D!
well...
it wasn't as well drawn as it could have been, though it was decent, and its lack of buttons made it hard to follow the story but...its cuteness made me smile, so that's worth at least a 3 and a seven star. I hope to see more of these with a little more effort put into it.
XiaoxiaoGOD responds:
thank you :D I hope to improve much more over time :3