~~REVIEW~~
Ok so you had another flash and you didnt tell me heh, anyways, here you have another good work of arts, I like your menu page with the city the color and the characters, but it also seems too "CRAMPED" up, it does lack a larger logo of the title and such, wish there was that to present the flash better but as its crapped enough i guess its ok, So anyways, OK so as i do start this the "NAVIGATION" buttons were a neat idea, but i would suggest more "SLEEK" buttons more fresh looking ones aswell, the art on those you had were so-so, As for the "ANIMATION" it was actually pretty good there so notbad on yourpart, it was not choppy but just right, as for the content, you gave it a good little story some good art style which does seem to get better as the film rolls on, I actually thought it was a cute story, seemed to go too fast towards the end kinda like if you were "RUSHING" it or something, but still an entertaining entry from you, its actually one of your better stories in a long while, anyways good stuff.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
could use a logo on the titele menu screen, and maybe dont cramp it up so much either, the ending seemed abit too fast though. maybe slow it down there.

~~OVERALL~~
Another amusing story here.

~X~

Think its a bit much for you but it was still entertaining. Kool.

that last one was alittle harsh but right

I hope this will look a lot better when the final product is released.

Spiderman wasn't my thing,
so I don't know the players.

Watched it four times and each time
was great.

Only annoyance is that initial 90 degree turn
when whoever first takes flight. Maybe tilt a little
going into turn.

The clicking feet into the flight machine was perfect!