LOL
Nice animation, but I suggest like a replay button and NOT as a loop. Once u learn all about macro media put sound like maybe a death metal dong :)
Nice though and good luck in the future.
Author Comments
So i was just bored one day and i decided to start stick animating its my first one And im posting it to ask u guys for some advice ive already know about the jump that i was to lazy to fix. :) so anyway i would appreciate some advice from every one.
love of the stick
as far as stick animation goes this has some cool features like the camera shake and blurs but the finishing move is quite possible the slickest effect i have seen in a simple stick fght kudos i wait for more. btw my name is jimmy so is the name a knock att jimmy or a nod :)
XDarknessX2 responds:
Well i could not think of anything else so i put jimmy piss but i ment to put Jimmy's Pissed. since hes like fighting. But thanks a lot for the review im working on a new one as we speak its going to be a bit longer im just testing out some features so it might have less fighting.
red stickman
lol look at the red stickman it has no head
XDarknessX2 responds:
Yeah Sorry About that. i worked more on the Attacker Then the Defender >.<
Decent, but short and lacking sound.
I enjoyed your use of blurs for the kicks, and the shake to help deter from noticing the background was a straight black line on a white screen (perhaps add some scenery in the future?). The animation was decent, and I quite liked the finishing move. The "Yeah >:]" was somewhat funny. There are a few blips in the screen on the black stick figure's legs, which I suggest you fix.
I would like to see length in any future productions of yours, and sound effects. Even music would be nice. You have potential, but I do predict this getting blammed due to it being so short and fairly simple. Hopefully it doesn't.
Continue to make more, because I liked your style.
XDarknessX2 responds:
Well as it is my first time i would put sound but im still learning the Basics about Macro-media.
Cool
You have sweet style and excellent use of blurs and shaking the screen. Of course, this is very short and has no sound effects or backgrounds, so I'm not giving it an amazing score. The green stuff could have maybe disappeared more smoothly, but I kinda like the roughness of it. I dunno if you'd wanna try a faster frame rate maybe?
XDarknessX2 responds:
Yeah like i said it was just a quick test so the next one i make will have some sound and ill add a background.