Needs a stop action code
~~REVIEW~~
Well here was an interesting and entertaining flash video the "CHARACTERS" were actually pretty cute and creative, i noticed this flash loops , you can fix that easily with a stop action code, by also addings osme play and replay buttons it should run better and not loop as to not allow users to miss something or come in on the middle of it and such, dont get me wrong this is a pretty neat flash here cute and lots to see but most of all the looping should be fixed, and also maybe fill in alot of the bland spots the white parts outside of the door scenes, a basic color would help but the white is just too bland if you ask me. so fix the looping ad something to the bland white spots, make the video somewhat longer and you should have something pretty decent here.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
fix the looping with a stop action code, fill in the bland areas, and as mentioned make it longer with even more stuff going on
~~OVERALL~~
abit short and needs some fixing but is entertaining for the mostpart
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