alright
It was funny, but some color, audio, and real movement would improve it a lot
Author Comments
Animated (poorly animated, though) comic. Made by me in the late 2005, when I was a kid. Well, when I was younger than I'm now. There is no sound, no music, no need to sue. Right now I'm working on a remake, that will include detailed backgrounds, characters and some new scenes. There are a lot of other "animated comics" out there by me, but they're all in russian, and needs to be translated.
UPD: Reuploaded, now you can read the text, that was washing away so quickly.
funny
ok, so the animation is a bit crap and so is the art...but your script is better than most of the stuff on this site so work on your art, then practice animating with it and then think about sound.
goodluck, looking forward to seeing you progress.
lol
how she know my name lol
cool
so funny i really liked it bad graphics cool story
DJFry responds:
Thanks! I'm happy =)
it's funny but...
you have to color it a bit more and make the animation a bit better but the jokes I liked.
DJFry responds:
Thanks, I will ;)