Not too bad

Decently animated. Try using a smoother brush. Also be more careful about not breathing into the mic. Pretty good voice acting though.

Timing

I can see where you are going, but you REALLY need to work on timing. I thought two or three times in there that the animation had simply ended abruptly. And the whole random event at the end being funny only really works when you are invested in what is happening already. You have to really be following the character as an audience and be able to anticipate what is coming next to have the full impact of a random even such as that.

Keep making flash please

Please don't listen to anyone else.

I enjoyed this. And I think you should continue.
RB

Shit Poor

I'm sorry, but there is no entertainment value.

It's all punch line, no setup. Not only that but the punchline just isn't good.