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Pretty good animation, but it needs to be longer and more variety when it comes to action. But overall its good 7/10
Author Comments
im still a noob in flash. it took so many freakin hours jus to learn a little piece of action scripting to make a preloader, but i dnt know if it'll even work right. u guys judge and criticize; tell me wat u think, advice; anything cuz animating is hard
but fun >:]
right click and press play to watch if u don't know
Not bad...
Definitely enjoyed it.
Try getting around to using some preloaders because those do help, and would also get rid of the right click issue.
Other thoughts are that you should also check somethings in your flash because something is obviously not working properly in my browser. I tried to stop the play ,because there is no stop to the looping film. I think a big part of my issue comes from that also, because when I right-clicked play again to stop it just started acting weird and looping the sound...
... Might have been a memory leak but you should check it out.
Well done and keep it up.
Not Bad.
My only complaint is that the viewer has to right click the flash and choose "play" for it to work. Otherwise, pretty good animation for a beginner.
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u should look into the idea of a button for your stop and staring the animation... it would improve your movies quite a lot... plus a stop action for you music... just so it doesn't over lap as it just did... if you are unsure on what the thing is going to be like ... export it as a movie and watch it my your self... just so that you can get all the bugs out. have a great day m8