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Maybe this could be the next peanut butter and jelly time song?
And here is what NO.1 JUDGE Xidious scores YOU.
1.6 STARS
It made me laugh but then it got annoying because the song was just bad, I can see it doing better had you put in better lyrics.
I don't think it will be
I was hoping it would be about the "Peanut Butter Jelly Time" thing, but it actually was not. This was not among the most horrible things I have seen, but it definitley was not something I would recommend. The song just comes off as kind of dumb, as it is about boogers and stuff. The animation could really use some work, as it looks pretty primitive. With more advances in flash, you could make it better. I am sorry this did not become nearly as popular as the Peanut Butter Jelly Time song.
DXT responds:
Don't worry ericho, it's received over 4,000 views on youtube :P.
constructive criticism
My last review was deleted for calling this what it was so here is some constructive criticism:
1. Don't make flashes that look like the works of a 12 year old
2. Don't choose songs that are for 12 year old's
3. Add a plot to your flash
4. This flash has a rating of 0.96 (would be blamed if resubmitted). Considerably improve your work before submitting anything else.
DXT responds:
Don't worry Ra, I flagged all your 12 year old reviews. Since the flash is still on here - I must've done something right. The flashes are a lot better than what you can do.
Not a great song..
But the animation you did is somewhat better then some people can do. The song seemed to be ahead of what the person was saying, that could have just been me though. Maybe next time make something besides this?