decent
that was decent man. it was smooth , and the ending seems just completely fit. its still a problem for me to animate animal walking , even with front angles like you. oh well
10/10
you'll be a good animator man (or maybe u are O.o )
Author Comments
Well I figured out on how to stop the loop, but it's too fun to watch so I left it alone.
Song (c) Kinky
- btw I'm still a beginner in flash production... I kind of suck.
Evil-eS responds:
haha well I do a lot of anatomical studies for my art. learning the way animals and people move is kinda a requirement for someone like me. ^^ and I'm sure you'll get better at it.
Nice Work
That Is Grade A Animation for a Test Run
Evil-eS responds:
^-^ thank you very much
Great Animation
As an animation exercise, this is great. :) The movement of the hind legs is realistic and fun to watch, and the part at the end where the dinosaur charges at the camera was a little unexpected and made for a great twist.
I think you could make a few tweaks here or there. For starters, I think you should get rid of the horizontal line at the bottom. It doesn't really make a good ground plane, since the dinosaur's feet is above the line in most of the animation. Another thing you could do is move the dinosaur's chest area up and down as it's walking to provide for some good secondary action. It would also be great if we could see the dinosaur's head, but if you wanted to leave it out at the top of the screen to emphasize how big it is, I could see how that works, although it's not really necessary.
Overall, this is a good animation, even if it doesn't really have a story, color, or music, which is always a plus. You've got some really good raw animation skill, which I think speaks a lot for itself. :) Great work!
Evil-eS responds:
Fixed the line ^^
and the head out of the picture was intentional, since the focus overall was of the legs themselves not the whole dino
either way thank you for the insight, much appreciated
well
my verdict is.....pretty coll!
Evil-eS responds:
this court is now adjourned :D
Nice piece, polish it up next :D
I think it's great so far. Walk cycles must be kind of tricky when dealing with extinct reptiles.
By the way, I have Flash CS4, but I hate it and I never use it... I don't like what Adobe is doing to Flash! I use CS3... I'm sure there are a lot of CS4 fans that would disagree with me on that...
Keep up the nice work.
Evil-eS responds:
D8> but i only have CS4