Walking Worm Ep1

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This is just the intro, and I apologize to you guys that want more. This is going to be done episode style, so consider this episode one. All criticism (good, bad, ugly, useful) will be appreciated. Suggestions encouraged. Help will be credited.
I have a script so if anyone wants to get involved contact me and I will explain the story more (Spoiler). Thanks.


Really good start

I'm honestly looking forward to more from this. Especially with the reason why the dead have become the undead.

Glad you killed off that bastard son too, he was horrible ;D

I'll be honest your art skills aren't the greatest, I just hope people don't mark you down for that because it's obvious that you are trying, your background details are great and I loved the lightning effect plus the sound, so you're without a doubt an A+ for effort, and as you continue this project your art skills will improve, and that's great because I think you're really promising, with a promising storyline.

Good luck for the future.

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Okay... Not bad

It was really interesting, the story was good and the way it was presented was ok, but the animation and color could be a little better though. Maybe adding shadows might do it some good?

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artblack01 responds:

Yeah, I agree, I think I rushed into this too. I need to make the animation more fluid and I should have checked my colors from scene to scene.

i am interested very interested

with a lkittle work you just mioght have somthing

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hey this is actually pretty good! few points though, the rain looks kinda really funny when it comes down in blue worms, the sound of the wind sometimes overstems the character in the first part and the animation could be more fluent, but overall i must say that i'mm looking to what happens in the next one!!

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artblack01 responds:

Thanks, I'll fix it, I think I've been rushing it.

Good and Bad

The voices were overpowered by the SFX. The art was done well until the character had a close-up. It almost looked like it was done in MS Paint.

I thought it was a little sadistically funny.


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artblack01 responds:

All done in flash, but I should have done more detail on the face when I did the close up (just zoomed it), thanks for the input.

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2.73 / 5.00

Feb 15, 2010
7:43 PM EST