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Overdrive 0.7

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This game is not yet complete. please comment on how it could be improved.
also you can press enter when it says well done or try again.

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horrible

The graphics would be somewhere in the "ok" section, steering has too much drift on it there by making gameplay annoying. The game itself isn't even complete after you leave the office and enter the next scene. The incompletion of the game got you this rating, you should make the steering sharper rather than drift like crazy, graphics are just ok, but it would help a lot if you improved on the frames so they don't look cheap quality. On a final note, COMPLETE a game before submitting it in.

Obviously not complete

But the premise and action could be good. I actually liked the control of the car and was surprised by the change of pace with the cinema/mission. There is potential here.

There's something to improve!

The game is not bad but you have to work on it. For example the control of the car should be more plausible even if not realistic; however I like the car sliding. Also the impact with setting and cars is too simple; moreover you crash into the cars even if you are simply near them. The last thing is the graphic, too simple and with only a few elements. After some work it could become a nice game!

"please comment on how it could be improved."

Here are a few points that I feel should be improved:

> Car controls feel abnormal. That isn't good in a game like this. These should be optimized and should be your #1 priority to prefect this before finishing your game. I can't stress that enough.

> The music at the start is quite generic and low quality, and on top of that it doesn't loop. I would suggest getting different music. Also, the second music doesn't loop at all.

> There isn't really any challange, besides the danger of running into the occasional car or two. All you have to do is get to the green arrow, which occasionally doesn't work (if you drive into the arrow nothing happens).

> Hit boxes feel weird, I was driving by a green car and it said I crashed. Hit boxes seem abnormally large.

> Graphics could be better, static images like that don't give that much of a feel for a game. Rotating tires would make the game seem faster.

I rated 5/10 because it is still unfinished, however if you were to release the game with it still looking like this I would most certainly rate it a zero.

I hope I helped.

beasco responds:

how could the steering be improved. sharper turning?

Pretty cool

I like the concept. The car feels a little unrealistic while driving. A crashing animation when you crash would be good instead of the immediate jump to game over. It needs some indicator about who you are (maybe a big arrow or make the car flash a little at the beginning). Some simple instructions would also be a nice touch.

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2.10 / 5.00

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Feb 14, 2010
11:44 AM EST