it was ok

the art was pretty good and the animation would do except for the fact that the voices and music combined make it impossible to understand whats going on or whats being said. to put it plainly, the music drowns out the already hard to understand voices. I like your art style but definitely work on your sound quality.

nice

Good animation

Err...

The music was too loud.
The animations weren't that incredible either; however, they were okay.
The voices weren't amazing either...
The movie's too slow-paced for the mood, too.

Good work either way.

Some Problems!

This's realy short, and that's playing in circles. make a menu, please!
A sugestion, make a action sene, like a figth in the end of the movie, to put a "to be continue" and make a longger story!

Cool

Great story line
But in some parts it was hard to hear the characters