are u an INDO ?!?! omg im also an indonesian if u r :D heh

Pretty colours

I absolutely love your use of gradients and colour. It makes everything so pretty! Your grasp of camera angles, story telling, colour, shading, and general movement are pretty good. You're also really good at reflecting moods and emotions. Just keep working on the animating and I have a feeling you'll be one of newground's best in no time ;D

Short in the end

That was a square end. I mean.. it finish abruptly.

You were right. The story is quite simple, and so is the animation. But the color and the backgrounds are still very pretty. I just got to say that I love the scene where the caracters reach is hand to the river, so that we have it right into the screen. Good effect, good perspective.

not bad

but you could have made the flash with an English Song

This was very nice.

The song was a good choice and the animation was well done. It's very anime-like. My only real gripe about this, is that I wish it was longer. I think you should not stop here, and do the whole song. :)

Nice work.