Bad.

What was wrong with the sound; it got on my nerves man.
Too short, doesn't make sense. Hope you'll improve.

eh...

Too random for my current mood and improve the sound thing and upload the new version. (Yes, you can do that. :) )

You should really make a story about story time (something normally random this time) and name it Real Story of The Story of Story Time, that would be quite amusing... :)

funny

i give you a 6 for the random GB at the end. and the explosion of corse. funny voice for the storyteller

It Was Okay

I usually rate 10, but it was far to loud. I was glad it was short and "semi-sweet" though.

Well..

I must be in a good mood because that actually thuroughly ammused me. A couple of comments:

1. I don't think the flash of Bush at the end was needed, it didn't add anything.
2. The levels on the voice were a bit loud.

Other than that I would rather like to see more storys of story time. I could see this going to funny places. Keep up the good work.