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Lots and lots of tweening, moderately funny, non-original, no preloader or play button.
Keep trying and you'll get somewhere.
Decent choice in music by the way.
ok thanks for the criticism, I am newbie and I have much to learn, I exaust for tutorials for macromedia flash but as I found many tutorials not look good, if you have any suggestions about complex tutorial please let me reports, greetings
Funny, but too choppy.
The artwork was just OK but it was funny, especially the part with the arrows firing into the hooker corpse. The framerate was TERRIBLE though. 3 frames per second is ridiculously bad and really detracted from the flash.
Spend more time on your artwork, draw more frames, get a better version of flash and you'll get a better score.
thanks for the criticism, that you liked at least a little, I am encouraged to continue refining with flash, I can not get a new version because the requirements of the new program are too complex to flash my computer, will have to resign myself to continue with the old macromedia programs hehe.
thanks for the time you took to view my animation and write the commentary correcting my mistakes. greetings
PS: sorry if my English is not well understood, is that I speak Spanish and know little of the language.
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