Great start!
The animation is of great quality and the black becomes very vibrant as the candle melts. Hope to see more from you!
Author Comments
Frame by frame is extremely rewarding
thanks Greenrat for the flash : )))))
TreasurePlanet responds:
thanks : )
Im working on a Mirror's Edge Short and like 3 other projects.
wow
its very smooth, tho it would be nice for some colors, specifically for the flame. i think it would make it stand out alot more. this reminds me of the 'color my-' series, its very good and although could make it longer. rated a 4, cuz i like it. =P
TreasurePlanet responds:
wow : ))
thank you very much for your kind review.
it's comments like this that really help keep me going.
just not enough
i think im echoing all the other reviews. but theres just not enough here. i dont think you see alot of this stuff on he portal becasue there scores dip to low.
theres nothing "wrong" with this buuuutt
already said it.
Thank You
TreasurePlanet responds:
thanks for responding to this.
i was aiming for somehting that was interesting and not a waste of time for the viewer. For me, seeing mediocre flash that get 2s and 3s are a waste. They are all the same.
And sure this may be the same. But, alteast I didn't waste your time.
Nice for a start
It's a good exercise, but not really worth being submitted. Next step would be to keep the lines cleaner
TreasurePlanet responds:
thanks for the response.
Cool but pointless
That was a nice animation, I like the style! But there's no point with the movie as whole, so I'm afraid that won't do. A longer movie in this style and with an actual story could be really nice!
TreasurePlanet responds:
Yes I can definitely see where you are coming from : )
thanks