YOU BASTARD!!!

YOU PUT UP THE NEW ONE WITHOUT EVEN TELLING ME!!!!
*sigh* Now that that's out of the way...

Wow. The first one got all around nicer reviews. Although, I do agree that despite better animating skills and "juicy sound fx" (oh yea! A creaking door! What won't they think of next?) this time around, the first actually WAS better. The ending, looping music, out of place sound and lack of a soundtrack more fitting to the experiences in this installment are all backwards steps from where you were in the first. I can understand the injury. Still alright though. Some suggestions:

1) Make a post asking for someone to contact you in regards to handling audio. This will solve problems for the next one.
2) When you get better, remake these both, but keep the original first. THIS can go...

I hope you do better next time. No hard feelings for the score, ok? Keep in touch!

DarkX.

You...

... need to work on your flash timing, your narratory expression, a little bit of your spelling, and your story. Your story is a bit cute, but it wastes too much with anime-styled reasoning and emotion, which are rather stiff and boring.

Put together something new, please. I'd like to see your best from this...

not very good

badly drawn and horrible sound quality. fix theese things fr the sake of ur battling average

Ok.

It was nice, but there are some spelling errors, and the end is very sudden. Also, the creaking of the door is annoying.