Hmm

Its better than your other work but It kind of made me think you actually tried on this one it was ok

You should have called it Emotions or something...

No structure at al...

er... maybe you should pracitce a bit longer?

Maybe you should first practise a bit longer before you put an movie on NG? I'm not good either but when i first got flash i didn't put my first movie on NG.

But fot the rest Keep on goin'!

What is it??? ohhhh facial features...

odd very odd

Nonplussed

All in all it looks like a slap-dash movie, like maybe your idea didn't pan out or something.
Keep trying!