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Dec 27, 2009 | 11:01 AM EST

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This was supposed to be a halloween special, but halloween is a few months ago now..
There were some voice-acting problems. I won't call any names. Kevin.

Well, it wasn't too halloween themed anyway..



Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Lots of potential

The best part of this was the animation. I felt it was funny how there was such splendid animation regarding the title and the transition effects but the other parts were fairly bland. I suggest you try to throw in some more music and more jokes. It seems like this ended quite quickily and there was not a "To Be Continued" or anything. At least you had some funny jokes like the random "Banana Phone" joke. Geez, how long has it been since I heard that meme referenced?

I also liked the little easter egg with the tiny words. For those of you wondering, it says, "If you can read this, you're too close to the screen". I do not think I am so much close to the screen as I am just a guy who likes at those things. The monser itself had a pretty good design. Try to work a little more on jokes and have more of an ending, but congrats on getting so many voices.

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00-BEN-00 responds:

Thanks for the review! It's really useful

The script had actually another ending, but it was 2 months past halloween already, so I made it an open end.
I noticed myself too that there wasn't too much music, I worked on that in the next animation I'm doing now called 'The Mine'.

Thanks again for the review! :D


Rated 4 / 5 stars

A bit disjointed, but still cool

I think I noticed a glitch or two in the timing that didn't look intentional, but still, this was fairly well-done. Nice choice of music for the mood, and some funny gags here & there. Keep 'em coming! :-)

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