hrmmm

Not exactly the best of Newgrounds. Not bad for a first though.

Hmh, not baaad...

It was midly entertaining, and the frame by frame was 'good' enough.
there's A LOT to improve though, it NEEDS music and/or sounds.
In the first scene there's this ("alarm"?) red flashing light which is disturbing to watch, try making it less 'intensive'...
I liked the 'drawing' style, i can see you put a bunch of effort on it, although it still needs a lot of work...
I think this has 'potential', so, keep it up!

Ambitious but it could be better

I won't lie the movie is terrible because it feels unfinished and even as an unfinished work it is not passable.

All you really needed is sound and perhaps making it longer to really suck you in.

Newgrounds filesize limit is about 10 megs so this gives you plenty of chances to keep adding to it until you have a suitable start, middle and end.

You got the start already but this would only work as a preview of a work in progress.

I often rush my work and want to show it off as soon as possible and that's all well in good but we all want a finished product.

Don't give up and keep at it because your first attempt looks to be so much better than most anyone elses first attempts.

Merry christmas.

-PowerRangerYELLOW

Not bad

For a first animation, it's alright. It's a bit rough on the animation. My sound card is on the fritz, so I can't really comment on that if there is any soundtrack. I'd say keep working at it. You'll do just fine with Flash.