Meh
It's well put together, for what it is. However, it ain't much.
Author Comments
Coo-ee, fellow Newgrounders!
Though this may be my first SUBMISSION to Newgrounds, it doesn't necessarily mean that I'm what you guys call a "n0oB." I've been working and tinkering with Flash, often teaching myself how to more efficiently work with Flash.
After lots of hard work, here it is! The audio is from the Christmas Special for "Blackadder," an old British comedy show. Go look it up on YouTube if you're intersted.
So, sit back, relax, and enjoy! Oh, and please recommend this for the Holiday 2009 Collection!!!
sir5000 responds:
I wouldn't blame you for saying that. This was just a short test for me and I decided to put it out to the Newgrounds audience to see THEIR feedback. This was nothing but a tiny "skit," if you will...
Charmed
As you yourself probably know, based on your author comments, this isn't fantastically animated, and it is fairly short.
But the audio was well synced and the choice of it made for a good lol. You are certainly less of a flash noob than I am (not that you are one at all ;) ) and overall this was a nice, colorful short. I look forward to more.
sir5000 responds:
This was more of a test for me than anything else. In reality, I'm HORRIBLE at flash compared to many others out there. I'm a blunt plastic kitchen knife, while they're shining Excaliburs. I'm Transformers 2, while they're Citizen Kane.
Anyway, I appreciate your positive response! I guarantee that there'll be more of me in the future!
OK.
The laugh track didn't help. People don't need help to know when to laugh. And frankly, it wasn't that funny.
However, I'll go easy on you because it's your first submission.
sir5000 responds:
I had no control at all whatsoever for the laugh track. It was just there in the audio.
Also, it's British comedy, it never directly gives its punchline to the audience...