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OOP_TMC episode 1

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It being X-mas and all, I thought I'd try to make us all laugh with a few jokes. The Midnight Club is a comedy crew I am a part of, these are just some of the jokes I tell. If you like this little demo, I shall do another one, but have many more jokes.

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Way too fast.

You shot the text by way too quickly, and I mean damn. I'm a decently-paced reader and I wasn't able to finish any segment of jokes. Funny, from what I could read, but certainly nothing extraordinary. Make a next/previous option, perhaps add some slight bg music, something to spice it up. Otherwise not too shabby, but then again it was a text-based flash. =P

Text too fast...

Couldn't read anything because the text was too fast. Maybe have buttons to flip between them, and sound effects.

BAD

This is nothing near animation
The pictures change too fast for some readers
No background music
Jokes were not funny

Good, but hard to read

The jokes are good, but you should add a pause function, this way the reader can read the jokes in his own pace.

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3,937
Votes
7
Score
2.01 / 5.00

Uploaded
Dec 19, 2009
9:50 AM EST