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Never Discontect A Pro

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Never Discontect A Pro. But if you do it this can happend. So here is a tip: Never Ever Disconect A Pro!

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Here is some constructive criticism...

okay start drawing ideas out in a notebook, do some narrative work. You had a good idea but it botched. Try getting some friends to look at your work critically before putting it up for jury, try and thumbnail your work for later pieces and make sure your timing is better. Besides that, you are going into a right direction.

lixomalewx responds:

Thanks 4 the tip man. I am going to that you said

Pathetic

This movie is short and stupid, I don't even know why it's 4.1 MB it lasts for about 2 seconds, and the graphics are terrible.

Terrible

It's short, bad and has no good meaning.
A pro wouldn't explode, he wouldn't be "pro" if he can't accept loss.

Try again.

funny but...

way too short and the drawings were kinda crappy but that was good

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Dec 18, 2009
4:03 PM EST