Who is the blue guy?
I need to say this got better efects than the first...
I like the green...
Author Comments
¡¡¡READ THIS PLEASE!!!
EDIT AGAIN: Yay! I fix the entire movie. (I think...) :D
If you review this, make me a favor, go to the scene selection and press the button of "White Unstoppable", in your review put if you listen the music or not, please.
EDIT Again: I think i fix it, i delete the menu music... I also know that i moved something and all the movie its wrong... xD... D:
EDIT: Sorry! The audio problem its still there... Watch the video without sound... D: D: D:
Second flash. Much better than the first one if you ask me.
It isnt a sequel of my first animation, i made a new "story" and this is the first chapter.
My flash has problems with the music, but i believe (and i hope) that its just the program and when i submit this in Newgrounds, the problems will disapear. If you have problems with the audio, just see the movie without sound D: .
Anyway, enjoy the movie.
CaligoIgnis responds:
Good! Another review!
The characters i will start to introduce them later. (Maybe when they stop being "circle guy" :P)
Im working in a new one since last week or month, dont remember and im sure it will be better that this, but after all, you are the viewers.
Thanks for my first 10. :)
Could have done more
I understand if you are a beginner and such, but I believe that particularly in the way of backgrounds you could have made at least something better than a plain beige strip.
The rest of my points go towards some of the nice things you did involving the 'camera' adjustment in the beginning with red flying into the wall, blur, etc.
Improve and make a 0.2!
CaligoIgnis responds:
Yes, im a begginer, dont add score me for that, vote the movie, not if im professional or not. Thanks for the other points, and i wont make a 0.2, im already bored of this movie xD. But thanks for the review.
(EDIT: Oh! Sorry! This is a misunderstanding, the 0-1 its like Chapter 0, part 1 or something like that, it isnt the version 0.1, i just couldnt edit the name because it was too long.)
Hey
I really liked it :D, The graphs were actually pretty good, Just 1 flaw.
Sound Effects, Add some :D
Other than that, It was really good. Looking foward to the second one.
CaligoIgnis responds:
Thanks for reviewing me! I cant find the correct sounds effects, thats why i dont put them in the movie. But i will try next time :)
Thank you again :)
5 guys fighting until the blue guy came at the end
I really like this animation. If I could give you a 9 1/2 stars, I would. I'm not sure what's wrong with the music in unstoppable white, but it kind of makes it more dramatic if you ask me.You could make the music longer in what ever program you use and there was no sound in unstoppable white. The half was because there wasn't a lot of scenery. You could tell you worked hard on it, though.
CaligoIgnis responds:
More dramatic? Really? xD
Actually its a problem... I though it was just my computer, but if you dont listen anything, the problem is still "alive". Thanks for the review, for the nine and for the favor. :)
Great work!
Great work! The animation is smooth and clear in contrast of the simplistic design of it's characters. I can see Xiao Xiao influencing your work and you did great!
CaligoIgnis responds:
Xiao Xiao influence?!?! Never noticed that... And i dont think so, but everyone have their opinions ¿Right? Thank you for the review and the nine :)
