sorry fo ryour loss 10/10
To everyone involved in the creation of this Flash: I love you.
This is the kind of stuff that makes me proud to be a member of Newgrounds.
Beautiful drawings, dramatic dialogue, and touching music... all arranged in a harmonious sequence that remains undisturbed until the movie's end, at which point the entire thing is relentlessly hurled into the shitter. I couldn't have asked for more.
Just... wow... Ya gotta be careful about things like that. I was left with a WTF moment. When you pull a joke that that your going to upset more people then will laugh. your artwork shows skill... ya just need to workon your matrial
This seemed like a well done story at the beginning, but the end ruined it all for me.
Visual- 5/10 the majority of the artwork was good like the first half of the story, but again your ending ruined it in my opinion.
Good music and voice-overs. But AGAIN the end ruined it
My suggestion: Don't ruin a good story with a lame and, offensive, joke. I would rate this zero but because of the reasons i listed above you made the first part of this very well so instead you get 5.
I so didnt see that coming. Good one.