Try more
You have to work more on your drawings,
It was short,
Try to put more effort into your flashes.
Try to use the brush tool.
I gave it a: 5/5 8/10
//Note: I gave it a five so that you would know that atleast someone voted 5.
//I voted it five just for kicks, else i would have voted it 4/5.
My experience level was high enough to raise the score from 1.65 to 1.68
Try more!