(title in work)

Overall a very generic Mario movie. This idea of outtakes or mistakes as you call them has been done countless times before. The only one I really enjoyed from this was the one where Mario smashes his head on the invisible box. That was a good take on the game. The others though, were mostly just orgies of bad sound effects and animation. Work on your ideas.

Ultimately bland :(

There really just wasn't anything funny and the animation was very lackluster.

it could be good

a few problems to slow and to much time of nothing and waiting
better graphics (recommended but could be funny without it)
longer

It's got potential,

... but I don't think it's anything we all haven't seen before a hundred times. I'm anxious to see where you go from here, though.

Oh, I gotta give kudos for using the sound byte from Redneck Rampage :D

if this isone of your first few submissions,

then it isn't half bad. Keep trying.