DOOD!

The flash I've ever had one of my songs in! THANK YOU for one! And while I have to agree that the flash is on the short end and lacking content, it shows effort, esp if you are still only learning : ) keep it up, and try not to let the negative critiques weigh you down. I hope you take the critiques below as input to encourage you where to work on, it would just be sad and unfortunate otherwise.

reading

i had to watch it twice to figure out what each character said. you need to display dialog for a longer period of time. also it was too short. its a step up from episode one, and yet its far away from what i would like to see, but as your new i guess that i can relate

Too short

Sorry dude, its just WAY too short. It looks like it could have a good storyline to it, but just don't make your movies too short. I would like to vote at least 7 or higher next time.

Way too short

Nothing really happens here or in your previous entry. The song doesn't even really begin until after the flash is done, and I can only assume that takes up most of the load time.

There is some potential here, but right now, neither of the parts of this series can be considered complete.

pointless

music loops when you repeat