wut

more story it needs more story and the text is way to fast so if you wanna make more fix stuff up

awsome

it is funny

okay

1. too short
2. bad animation
okay im gonna tell you what i tell every one if this is your first flash you ever made don't post it. wait until you get better. there was no tweening. animation is not smooth. im not trying to put you down but i see that you can get better. keep practiceing.

BRILLANT!!!

Oh that is a wonderful job. Very funny. Plus for one who has sniffed sharpie markers before, I get it. MOAR!!!