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Tankmen 7: Steve's Quest

November 14, 2009 –
December 14, 2009
This entry was deleted.

Here is its eulogy, a collection of the kind words written about it while still among the living. They shall live on forever in its place.

Author Comments

Thanks to Re-evolution for the sprites.

Steve's amazing (1 minute) quest to find Captain. It gets intense. There are good guys, bad guys, more bad guys, and maybe a pedo.

And you can basically turn it off when the song ends, I put zero effort into it after that point.

But there is Op Ivy... and they are singing Knowlege... so fiev nao.

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And yet you submitted it. I wouldn't be too surprised by the outcome of your animation in the portal, would you?

The animation was non existent, a simple set of tweens to create the illusion of movement and the same repetitive running cycle. I mean, you could of at least made them transparent so they didn't overlap each other?

The background music annoyed me as well, you didn't have time to put in some effort for basic voice acting yet you stuck in some form of sound anyway, another show at your lack of effort in this animation.

In the future, spend a little more time on this, build a background, make it realistic. The art of animation is to allude the viewer into thinking they are somewhere else, you won't do that with some sprites and a blue background.

Sorry, man, but I have a bad feeling that this is gonna be blammed.
Don't worry, just see where your mistakes were and don't repeat them. :)

And about the sprites... Hell, I can't draw, so basically my flash works are with sprites, mostly Mortal Kombat sprites... So if you're not into drawing, try with already made sprites.

Next time put some effort in. the 1 is for making a custom sprite.

You will gain experience by submitting bad flashes? No, make more flashes and keep the crap to yourself. This isn't tankmen 7, or even tankmen. Please read some guides online, buy a book on making flash, or just stop making flash period. Don't clog the arteries of the flash portal.

yeah... that's all...

It just didn't seem like you put a lot of effort into this at all...

There was no background, no voicing until the very end, and the animations were very repetitive.

Better luck next time.

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1.59 / 5.00