Too,,,
Everything is too slow and deliberate. You need to make things show more force when say, ripping up a stone that weighs hundreds of pounds. And, all the graves and hands were just copied and pasted. Keep practicing.
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the undead crawl from the ground to rise against the all ruling darkness...
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(NEEDS FLASH PLAYER 10 TO PLAY!!)
(NB- this is just some expirimental shit i was working on- it's not the best ever, but it'll do)
youtube version:
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smartesthere responds:
Thanks for the advice
wtf am I watching?!?!?
I think my main issue was that everything looked the same. Hands are all the same, graves are all the same....and so on.....
made no sense
animate ok but made no sense
