you are talented, but...
i liked what you were doing, but it needs to be clean, and it needs to have action.
i gave you an 8 because i know you could do way better. use your talent, and push beyond what you have done here and you will do GREAT!
Author Comments
I hope you like it! LEAVE A REVIEW, I love to read them! I also love constructive feedback. I have tried to settle into a atyle, so lets see what happens.
(note) THIS IS PART TWO in a movie series!!! (Called "Intro to my life" under my movies). REST ASSURED this one has better sound, graphics, and is longer. Watch this one first if you want, they are kinda interchangable.
The next in the series will explore Kevins origins.
Prestokey responds:
I agree, there is not enough action. However, that was not the tone of the animation thus far. I am still developing my style, I dont know what you mean by "clean up", so give me a PM so I can get better. If you dont believe I am improving, look at my previous animation, haha. Thank you for the score, I like getting constructive critisism. I hope you liked it in the end :)
Nice
The sound fit well, the story was alright and the animating was good. The drawing style didn't bother me at all. Maybe you could add sound effects (not major ones, just a few) to some scenes.
Prestokey responds:
Thank you! I will try to insert sound effects, but I didnt find them necissary to this movie.
Not bad
Its prety cool il give u a 9 for the effort and try to put more colors in ur animation next time!
Prestokey responds:
Thank you! I worked very hard on this. I dont really want very much colors, and only use them some of the time. Its just how I want this animation to look.
good movie!!
i rated 5 i hhope you'll do the same with mine
god animation you did
Prestokey responds:
I will vote 5 if it deserves it, haha. If you worked hard, im sure it does. Anyway, thank you for the vote, I hope you liked it.