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Cheesecake?

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Quicky i knocked up in the dead of the night!
everyone must love cheesecake...

and lemon mourange, morang... mourr... well however you spell the damn thing!

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Pretty Awesome

More of these, instead of the last upload. Loved the sound, and animation seemed good. However together they didn't flow too well.

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that.....wuz.....AWSOME!!!!!! i luv cheese cake...now more than ever lol

basic

its was pretty basic for kinetic typography. This was a good starting point to improve by doing something else with the letters, more movement, be creative!

Funky-Chickin responds:

I saw what you meant. very cool!
I know for next time eh! thx a bunch!

amusing

Its not bad i guess, i just think that maybe you could have put some sort of animatoin in it besides just text

Great. Now I'm hungry.

The lyrics are decent, but some of the sound editing is tough to make out. Also, it would've been nice to have something to look at besides just plain text. Imagine if the Sandwich MV only had plain text.
I can totally tell that there was some effort put into the lyrics, but almost everything else is a little lacking. Remake this, make it a little longer, add in some animation, and you're golden. I guarantee it.

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Score
2.75 / 5.00

Uploaded
Nov 2, 2009
5:58 PM EST
Genre
Music Video
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