I thought it was short and sweet. Comparing this to my first animaton, you are miles better and I understand that you have a minute time-limit. Looking forward to seeing your next week that will be able to be longer. Keep at it :)
ha thank you :) ive still got a long way to go yet but glad to hear im on the right track! Thanks for understanding the length too, i had so many ideas that i wanted to put in lol
In My Opinion . . .
I love industrial based themes, the audio fitted perfectly and the animation ran smoothly and was well spaced out (although I was pretty scared that it was just a very small loop at the beginning). It could've been a little longer so after all has been said and done I am giving (9 / 10) and (5 / 5).
If you want any ideas for any future projects you could make a game based on this project and in order for them to complete the level they have to arrange the machinery so that it can complete its task successfully, however if you feel that it is too big for you at the moment then you could make a minor game in which they click buttons and depending on which button they click an appropriate action occurs. I wish you luck for your future :)
Thanks m8 :). Yeh that actually sounds like a pretty good idea... im not quite at the level to fully work with action script yet to make a game but I did like working in that style, so a game seems great. thanks for the ideas!
Yeah i was worried about the length of my begining too. Not alot of different sounds happen at that point so i didnt get alot of ideas from listening to it, and as i only had a few weeks to do it in i didnt have much time to improvise. But thanks for sticking through it and watching!. :)
not bad for ur first but it was short and didnt flow better luck next one
yeah annoyingly i didnt have much choice with the length. Yeah i get what you mean by the not flowing much. Somthing to work on thanks for the input :)
hey that aint half bad for your first 8\10 for your flash and plus 2 because you said m8 just before
haha thanks :) i appreciate it
not bad for a first flash .... keep it up man !
thanks m8 i will, and hopefully i'll improve :)