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Considering that you're a beginner, the animation was not bad, though it should flow more smoothly. The drawings however, are terrible. They would have been better if they were supposed to be something other than humans. Those would come with practice. The storyline was again, terrible (but I'm shouldn't be one to talk as I'm creatively challenged).