A Bit Choppy

Good idea but it could have been elaborated on a bit and the animation is slow and choppy.

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yeah this is a good idea, its a start, a working project, but its not anything right now, this should not have gone through. Not to mention that its just lines and stick figures.... D:(

It's a start.

Your animation is choppy, and the viewer can obviously see the individual frames. Length is also and issue. since the whole flash was very short. The concept was nice, though. I think I'd like to see you develop this flash further. good try, but do it again better next time.

o.o

Weird... but not bad either :o