oh no.

Ok. Stop uploading your terrible animations. they are terrible. like inside flash. you didn't "Come up with that" you saw animator vs animation, and ripped it off terribly. Ive stopped uploading bad stuff, why don't you?

Hmmmm

I don't quite understand what concept you're trying to explore here
as a piece of ort I have to view this very objectifiely
bleh 9/10
cos of the amazing smoke effects!

Maybe if it was your first.

Well I can undersatnd if this was your first flash attempt, if you keep trying then you will get very good at this, if you do upload this again with sound and detail then it will be very intresting to watch :) keep it comin.

Better than I expected.

I was expecting something to blam from the first image. Turns out it wasn't that bad. The animation was reasonably fluid, and it was to the point, not unnecessarily long. I only felt it was mildly humorous, but maybe thats just me.

I think some well done sound would have brought it up to an 8/10 for me, and more details in general would have made it even better. Good luck with it in the future!