The only thing i didnt like was the major pause after he said fami-
i thought he was going to see his family or something, which had me tricked. many others were tricked by this so your movie was successful.
its a good laugh but not something you can see twice... still, great job.
this is so funny!!! hahah!!! i love you! keep em coming!!
:D thank you, I defenetly will keep them coming
- Appropriate music
- Surprise end
- Music stops too early
- Background and snowflakes a tad shoddy
Now that I think about it The music does cut out a bit to fast, maybe I should've made it fade.
The backgrounds are ones that I found for paper mario, sorry if they look like crap :(
And the snowflakes were animated very quickly so there wasn't much effort out into it.
okay.. a simple but funny Storytwist..^^ cannot say more about this :P
hehe, thanks for the review.
Get rid of that road. :P
Guns? In Mushroom Kingdom?. Was NOT expecting that. An extra for a good laugh.
Well, I'll rate it now. -2 for the dull font. -2 for the badly drawn road.
+1 for causing the guns+MK paradox and +2 for the good laugh.
I'll rate you 4/5.
Alright, so next time, better art and more exciting font.
Thanks for the awesome score!