noice
some plot would have been cool but no need better then i can do lol :) see you on WOW
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ShadedBlackLines did the loading art!
These 4 little flashes were to test my new Intuos4 Tablet.
Please enjoy them, and please don't blam me :D.
I really want to be a part of this site, so I worked really hard.
New to Flash, so these are what I could do.
Any advice, tips or comments are greatly appreciated.
PS: I've heard "My flashes lack plot." before.
7/8 of Newgrounds lacks plot, but here is the plot for the animation:
The Ball Fails, The Heart Breaks, The Man Runs, And The Plant Grows and Dies.
Neat
I like the stream of consciousness feel to it. Might be interesting tying the four separate pieces together with one plot.
IKanzAnimate responds:
Thanks
nice
altogether I think its good but I want more!!! =P
IKanzAnimate responds:
Gunna be workin on another one soon
keep it up
youre' on to something here, just try to put a background picture into it and clean it up a bit and you have yourself a good flash. Nice music choice too.
IKanzAnimate responds:
Thanks for the tips, and as for the music, i didnt have a song to fit ALL of them, so i resorted to a simple song :D
Okay but more
Needs more stuff. The stuff you had was okay but it needs more to qualify as a real flash movie.
IKanzAnimate responds:
Going to work on a much longer flash, adding backrounds, sounds, and make it really nice. these were just to test out flash and a tablet