Ehhhhhh.... Not so much.
Well... I didn't like it. As was said before, it wasn't that funny. Voices need work so they can be better understood. Animation could use improvement (but I have seen worse within the portal). All in all, my advice to you is to keep practicing. Look up tutorials online and seek assistance from other avenues. That'll be the quickest way to improve. :) This video might be crap, but I think you might have some talent that you have yet to discover. Don't be disheartened, just keep at it and you'll get it eventually.