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Cheesy Pickle

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This is my first newgrownds video. So please take it easy If you dont like it.

Sorry If you cant understand the lyrics here they are.

Im a cheesy pickle,
im an onion,
Im the cheesiest pickle,
im the onion,
I taste like crap,
Il make you cry,
Thats a wrap.

Sofeel free to sing along :)

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Ehhhhhh.... Not so much.

Well... I didn't like it. As was said before, it wasn't that funny. Voices need work so they can be better understood. Animation could use improvement (but I have seen worse within the portal). All in all, my advice to you is to keep practicing. Look up tutorials online and seek assistance from other avenues. That'll be the quickest way to improve. :) This video might be crap, but I think you might have some talent that you have yet to discover. Don't be disheartened, just keep at it and you'll get it eventually.

BitzAnBobz responds:

Thanks for the advice but on my channel it does say iv only been making flash animations for a week

lol wtf

i thought it said
"im a cheesy pickle
on the radio
im the cheesiest pickle
on the radio
i paid 4 the crack
i made the crack
like a rap"
it made me laff so ill giv u a pretty good score :P

theres no preloader.

somehow I stayed to watch it, but if you want your "fans" to know that its loading, add a simple preloader. other than that ok.

Not... good...

both the animation and drawings need work and it's just not that funny...

but keep on trying....

BitzAnBobz responds:

It wasnt really supposed to be that funny. Its just its my first animation on newgrounds and Iv only been making animations for about a week

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3.00 / 5.00

Sep 3, 2009
3:46 PM EDT