Hmm...
That was very nice and a good idea but it was kinda decent...
Author Comments
Whew! my first flash submision! Ususally, I don't stay on one project for long so none of them get finished, but here is a short animation that I made as an experiment because I was struck by how magestic the sun is. An experimental flash, so please rate it like one.
I have been getting a lot of people saying "WHAT THE HECK DOES IT MEAN????!!!!", but maybe, before you ask that question you should stop and say "does it really have to mean anything? Thanks! Oh, and it would be nice if people who rate it one give a review, because I really hate it when I can't fix something because I don't know what it is :D. Thank you!
UPDATE!!! YAY! flash ads are working. you don't care, but I do!
x2115 responds:
I am glad that you think that it was a good idea, and where you are coming from is understandable, yet this is my first flash :D so, yeah
no fuck you im
rateing tEEeEEEEENNNNGGGHHHHH so 4/5 10/10 bitch
Kind of mesmerizing
This is great. There doesnt have to be a point to it. Indeed, the viewer can decide what it means, if anything. The music is very nice, too. Good job.
x2115 responds:
I can't draw a thumbs up with text, but that is what I would give you! Thanks! For my first flash this seems like it is doing really good!
Nice work
I love the concept of this, but it did take me watching it twice to get the story. I think it would be a good idea to work on the silhouettes to make them clearer. Also, I wish you would have added more to the story, but I like how you had things end where they began. I hope you don't change that if you add to it in the future. The music was perfect. Over all good work.
x2115 responds:
Nope, I won't change that, don't worry :D If I do decide to change it, I will take your ideas into consideration! thanks!
Eerie
It was a wonderful concept. a little creepy but nicely done. My only problem is that you probobly could have done a better job on the "burning down" part. other than that, i thought it was great.
x2115 responds:
Yes, I am no good at making fire, I agree with you that it looks like crap. Thanks for the review though!
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3.72 / 5.00
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- Aug 22, 2009
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