well...

it needs improvement a lot. I used to animate(even though I never uploaded anything to NG) so let me give you some advice. Balls with lines for eyes are boring. Poorly drawn backgrounds are even more so, and using music over and over can give your flash a very "NOOB" feeling. I find its best to avoid big series or stories, and just practice. draw a stick figure, make him walk. then do it again, ans again. make him ore realistic and then try, work out your basic movements and if you can't get that right, do it yourself while looking in the mirror. You have some potential, just no one likes little spheres with lines for eyes :\
I hope to see more for you,

~Scorn

Nice, but is it great?

It seems nice, but it could of been longer. Cutting it off so early was a mistake. The graphics weren't too great either, but I would of ignored that if it was longer. Short flashes are okay with good graphics, and bad graphics are okay with long flashes.

Very wierd

Suprisingly, this drawings were bad, but the animation was good. Parts of it were good and funny, but the ending was really cheesy and could have been much better. You are a good animation but a bad drawer and have some potential, I would suggest some drawing tutorials, but good jub otherwise. I would have gave it a 6, but 5 for the cheesy ending.