The first one is good, but this is BETTER
9 over 10 for this flash, good animation even though your drawing sticks.
Author Comments
Hello people of Newgrounds
I am here to make an animation more mine, where is the continuation of the "Prologue" that I did. For better understanding of the animation in my profile and watch ^ ^
There is a change of style and different kinematics. Say this is the first milestone in history, but the main action and plot will be formed in the next chapter, which is already being produced.
Tried to improve the captions.
I hope that is highly improved!
Thank you all
a hug from a Brazilian animator
Enjoy the animation o /
bom inicio de serie
eu gostei, principalmente por que pude entender, a história é complicada mas o filme ficou bom, como dizem os newgrounders, i can´t wait for more
grande flash!
uma grande história bastante interessante, ainda há muito para descobrir...
o único problema são as vozes que podiam estar melhores e também houve uma parte em que não estava legendada (problema para quem não sabe português)
assim espero que a próxima parte seja tão boa ou melhor como esta
193 responds:
WOW! Um brasileiro ^^
A próxima animação terá bastante ação e envolvimento que essa não teve. A história será puxada com um bocado de suspense e drama
Também estou aprendendo algumas técnicas com grandes animadores como Cloudnew :D
Vlw cara o/
Pretty good, but room for improvement.
I liked it. Just thought voice acting could be a little better and animation has room for improvement. I like the idea though and the music choice. Looking forward to the next one.
193 responds:
The next chapter will really impress, he is already being done with a bit of action and understand the history
Thank very much ^^
Ok animation
There wasnt much animation, but what is here looks good. The captions are good and give a good idea of what is going on. Glad there will be some plot development in the next installment.
193 responds:
In the next chapter more action and involvement will take the storyline. You can bet, will not be disappointed ^ ^