Decent animation, but fix the eyes. The eyes are that removed that extra 5.
Author Comments
Mostly trying to caricature Doug ' Darien' Walker - AKA ThatGuyWithTheGlasses while saying his famous catch phrase.
Eyes
He shouldn't look down like he is shy or ashamed or something.
Eyes
His eyes need to be Green not Brown.
Not bad
but you should animate entire episodes instead of just the opening
Super8mm responds:
It would require Doug TGWTG to make me an audio, maybe this fall that is if he's got time and he's interested.
Aww... :(
I was sort of getting excited to see a full Nostalgia Critic cartoon, but oh well. The five second catchphrase was excellent though, I would just work on making something longer.
6/10 - It would be a 4 or a 5 out of ten, but the Nostalgia Critic brings it up a whole couple of points.