lol

the souneffects made me lauf the animation was exelent (exuse my spelling) and the vioces need to be a bit more adult like or no voice at all

Interesting

You show great potential for flash. There are a couple points of interest I'd like to touch base. First, your voice acting could use some work. Except for the growling demons (I believe that's what they were), all of your characters sounded too much alike. I couldn't tell 'James Dean' from 'David', or even the as-of-yet nameless person for that matter. Second, you should add a preloader to your movies. That way, when you start making your future flash longer, your movies and such will have the chance to fully load before playing. Otherwise, you'll run into problems in the future with movies freezing up so thatthey can load more before the movie begins to play again. And third, it looked to me that some frame skipping has occured a couple times in the movie. At one point, the nameless person's head is without the body when he enters the car. And when they jump down the hatch to 'David', the background briefly, but noticeably, goes completely white. It would help you later on to make sure that every frame works as they should, lest you leave scraps for hawk-eyed critics to chew on. I offer this friendly advice in the hopes that your animating and voice acting skills improve so that you can become a great expert with flash.

Not bad

But could be better, it's just that you didn't seem to have put effort into the voice acting, and I'm thinking ALL sounds are made with your voice, except for the taps.
Also, no preloader, and it's on an infinite loop.

P.S You took the James Dean part from Constantine, which really isn't the type of movie to quote with zombies.

a few glitches

storyline 5/5 interesting story
animation 2/5 drawings good but there are a few probs with backgrounds and subtitles
sound 1/5 most voices sounded the same(try getting different people to help you or use audacity to change pitches), also try getting some more sound boards for effects I noticed you used you voice for some and it really does sound bad.

overall 2.6 not good although the story is good the sound and glitches let it down also get a preloader so the animation runs when its wanted and does not repeat(make one using a flash tutorial or download one from newgrounds download link)

Good luck with part 2

god!

Ive seen this so many times!!!!
Please enough with the stick figure heroes. The genre has been raped, murdered, revived and raped again. Just stop!