hmmm

u could try to work a bit more on story

Choppy

It was choppy at points.

When you were making the flash, maybe you forgot to animate some of the frames?

Sounds, animation

Plot is good, and so are the sounds. They both match up to each other. As for the animation itself, you should've used small holes instead of arrows. This would've been great except for the fact it is too short.

ok, this is.. well...

not to good, but i really like the "im ugly" part. this is noth the best and the voices are from a program so they ound pretty unenthusiastic. it could have some better grafics but it still was pretty good.