Uhmm... Good !
Its good for a first flash. Audio quality is a bit bad. Try a new mic or something. Waiting for others...
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It's just another random day, where another random apocalypse is happening in another random world. Two men are on a mission to stand in awe and pay no attention whatsoever. It's just Another Random Life.
This is just the first in (hopefully) many additions to the Another Random Life series. I've been trying to finish something to submit for about 3 years, and have many unfinished projects, and this one took a matter of 3 days. It's rather short, but nonetheless enjoy!!!
Please let me know if I should make more, so this series can flourish like a porcupine covered ostridge feather elapsed on a 20 degrees angle on the left side of a penguin.
From, your friendly neibourhood, Chris Axiaq/ AKA: No-Flashin-In-Public
It was alright...
...I can see you making a series out of this. Your drawing is good, but I think you need to take more time to introduce your characters in your flashes. Maybe an intro scene for your series, or something.
For this animation in particular, I think you could have added a couple more jokes in there. The one you had was alright, but a couple more would have made it a complete animation.
You really need to sort out the sound quality, as this kind of ruined the joke, as you were more concerned about how horrible the sound was.
Other than that, you are getting there!
that what she said
tehehe thats was funny , good job on your you first submited flash , looking foward to completing our project
toodles,
Checkered Demon
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