nice
good and fast paced i like that but obliviously , too short
Author Comments
My thoughts was: A Valley where sticks die but i didnt go so long with the animation, but i decided to submit i anyway, there are no sounds, no speciel effects. erhmm... ENJOY!
It's too short
This animation has potential but it's severly limited by its length. The audience can hardly see what's happening.
My advise, slow down! Aim for a longer length for animation (20 seconds?) and maybe include some explosions and a prize that they're fighting for. The movement (what I caught of it) was fluid however.
Too short, needs more to make it stand out. 61/100 C.
louwe3 responds:
thx... i will for sure make this longer now and ermm.... sorry for the frame rate i dunno wats happened i think NG fucked it up, but i will start very soon on making a longer animation with sounds and maybe speciel efffetcs and stuff....(damn you fps!) xD
Too short
It's not bad, but it's just too short!
pretty good
could be longer and a slow down a bit with the framework but its a job well done
Too short, and too fast-paced
The concept you have here is good, but the execution needs some work. Firstly, it was way too short. If it was somewhat longer, I believe people would enjoy it more (in my opinion, anyway). Secondly, it was so fast-paced that it basically kills the effect that you are going for. I had to replay it twice to figure out what was happening. Thirdly, if you were going to rework this, I would definitely add some sound in there, as this piece definitely has the potential for a lot more.
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