Not convincing enough

This ad you made is good except that it's not convincing enough. You need to make it more convincing. Other than that, you did good making a flash ad

Great ad!

I also saw Tom's newspost. I didn't even think about submitting them here on newgrounds to show off. There is always a website called spamtheweb that you can upload things to and link to the topic. Make sure to link this to the topic so he has a better chance of seeing it too!

When clicking the ad it doesn't go to a working link so I don't know if that was on purpose or by accident.

The Ad itself looks great. I wouldn't mind seeing something like this on newgrounds at all. It contains a little bit more animation than some of the other ads, but it still looks great.

What I really like about it is it catches the eye of the viewer and that's exactly what you want form an ad. When I see it I want to finish watching it just to see what happens.

Good ad all around. Good luck I hope he uses it!

It's a movie... Not a bad ad though

An ad is like a very very short movie and should be treated as such, moreover this had no interactivity making your submission as a game wrong.

ehh.

Sorry, but I think they got a good enough ad at the top and bottem of the page saying "buy me!", and right under your account and SUBMIT is STORE. So I think people see it alot.